What I was trying to do

An artsy image of a gallery full of people looking at other artsy images in Downtown Los Angeles. I wanted the viewer to feel "outside of" as these high culture events often do. I also wanted to invert of the normal idea of a window, which in this case actively obfuscates the scene it's supposed to be looking in on (although abstraction itself holds a different kind of clarity).

What worked

I'm happy with the overall texture. I like that I managed to retain human forms amidst the abstraction.

What I'd do differently

I'd make the image a tad sharper and try and get a face or front in the frame. I'd like a smoother transition from left to right.