What I was trying to do

I saw a woman on her way to work or school maybe. She was very to her self, there was even a moment she closet her eyes. I thought it was very mindful, maybe a little nervous? I tried to capture that mindful moment in that train.

What worked

The black panel works well as a canvas to reflect the women’s portrait.

What I'd do differently

Maybe more context of the train. Maybe one more layer added.