I think I’ve managed to capture a genuine moment - the subjects have spotted the camera, but they’ve not changed their behaviour too much because of it.
What worked:
I like that there are things to find in the image; the half-hidden child behind her father amid all the scooters.
I also think that monochrome helps this image stand out. The colourful Lime scooters don’t overpower the subjects, and it’s helps enhance the natural contrast of parts of the photo like the white in the man’s beard.
What I'd do differently:
Ideally I wouldn’t frame it quite so tightly - I came around the corner and had to shoot quickly, but with another go at it, I’d like to give a more room in front of the scooters, especially to capture the one that’s fallen over in the bottom-right of the frame.
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