2
13 September
Camera
RICOH IMAGING COMPANY, LTD. GR II
Lens
GR LENS
CameraRICOH IMAGING COMPANY, LTD. GR IILensGR LENS18mm
Intent
Behind the frame
- What I was trying to do:
- The scene attracted my attention as it show apparently hidden sorrow while the world rushes by without taking notice.
- What worked:
- The juxtaposition of the couple in the centre with the man rushing by. A diagonal line with the man, the couple, and a third person behind. Exposure and contrast and d.o.f. Seem good.
- What I'd do differently:
- Maybe a slightly greater distance to get the foreground man completely in the frame. But I had to act fast as the moment was gone in a fraction of a second. ( Fixed 18mm lens on gr2. )
Response
Community feedback
Member comments
Great one! I like the fact that you did not have enough time to include the head of the men on the right because it proves that you took this immediately when you noticed it. Which makes it real and authentic. And I do like the contrast between the couple and the lonely business men.
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