I wanted this frame to evoke questions, where is she going? Why is she walking on the tracks? Is she going to the barn?
What worked:
Monochrome works well in this image, far better than color in my opinion.
What I'd do differently:
I’d liked to have gotten the subject in a slightly different vantage point that would have centered the bridge with her in 1/3 and the barn in 1/3. That would have made the image more balanced.
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Colin M.1 Sep
I agree with you, David, about the image being more evocative in b & w, and the subject being off centre makes a difference as well.
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I agree with you, David, about the image being more evocative in b & w, and the subject being off centre makes a difference as well.
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