This scene interested me as it's almost entirely lit with phones (screens and the flashlight). I also thought it was interesting that on a beautiful summer night friends gathered in the park and spent time on their phones. Even the couple embracing is looking at their phone.
What worked:
The lighting and concept.
What I'd do differently:
Due to the lack of light there is a lot of noise and it's difficult to make out the figures in the background. I may have waited a little longer to see if I could get a different action from the woman with the flashlight as she is mid step.
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Colin M.1 Sep
An indictment on the failure of people to even recognise their inability to communicate with other hoomans. Well spotted and conveyed onto the image, Hilary.
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An indictment on the failure of people to even recognise their inability to communicate with other hoomans. Well spotted and conveyed onto the image, Hilary.
Thanks Colin! Really appreciate that.
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