What I was trying to do

we where on a photo walk and we stopped at this little cafe in Exeter, I noticed this young lady who looked like she was studying while having a drink, I just looked up and captured this image as she watched us arrive

What worked

the dappled light catching her see us and the bright colours

What I'd do differently

perhaps I should have taken a step to the right but that may have made her face disappear in the bright reflection