What I was trying to do

Build a composition more intentionally with a longer focal length, using transparency reflections and overlapping planes to create depth and abstraction.

What worked

The orange pop of the ambiguous figures give the image a subject, but there’s a feeling of movement and making the viewer work to understand the different spaces.

What I'd do differently

Reframe slightly to try and include a bit more visual interest in the right of the frame, while keeping the monks central.