Build a composition more intentionally with a longer focal length, using transparency reflections and overlapping planes to create depth and abstraction.
What worked:
The orange pop of the ambiguous figures give the image a subject, but there’s a feeling of movement and making the viewer work to understand the different spaces.
What I'd do differently:
Reframe slightly to try and include a bit more visual interest in the right of the frame, while keeping the monks central.
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