Intent
What I was trying to do
I was watching people coming in and out of the cafe where I was sitting with my camera perched on the table and thought about how strangers are always just coming and going.
What worked
It lined up perfectly and I was happy with the two subjects in the frame.
What I'd do differently
Honestly, not much - maybe go for a wider shot?
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Seb Hitchcock252 Jul
Really like this one Patty. I like how they have their backs to each other but there is a connection with hands in some way. I also like how its overexposed in the highlights which adds more defining boundaries in the shot.
patty connelly2 Jul
Thank you for your comments. I hadn’t even noticed the boundaries created that you mentioned. I need to look more objectively at my work, rather than just at the moment captured. This a great reminder. 🙏🏻