Intent
Behind the frame
- What I was trying to do:
- I was watching people coming in and out of the cafe where I was sitting with my camera perched on the table and thought about how strangers are always just coming and going.
- What worked:
- It lined up perfectly and I was happy with the two subjects in the frame.
- What I'd do differently:
- Honestly, not much - maybe go for a wider shot?
Shoutout
patty connelly's first shoutout, picked out by the editors in #37 Behind Glass.
Response
Community feedback
Member comments
Really like this one Patty. I like how they have their backs to each other but there is a connection with hands in some way. I also like how its overexposed in the highlights which adds more defining boundaries in the shot.
Thank you for your comments. I hadn’t even noticed the boundaries created that you mentioned. I need to look more objectively at my work, rather than just at the moment captured. This a great reminder. 🙏🏻
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