The woman alone, deep in thought. She is reflective, her aloneness amplified by her gaze out onto the street. I’m trying to show that ‘blue’ can be more than a colour alone, but can represent a mood.
What worked:
The ‘paleness’ of the blue in her clothing works for me because it describes fading youth and the paradox of growing old.
What I'd do differently:
I would have preferred space between her and the man reflected in the window. Perhaps it could have helped better convey the feeling of isolation?
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Colin M.18 Aug
The ageing woman juxtaposed against the ageing sandstone that gives away the location of the image.
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The ageing woman juxtaposed against the ageing sandstone that gives away the location of the image.
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